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A man starts getting letters with his name on but with another address on it (the other is crossed out and his written in). He goes there out of curiosity and starts watching the place. After a while (a few days) he loses patience and breaks in. What does he find?

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His own dead body

 

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I don't know, I'm not a script writer. ;)

There are several ways you could go from there though, could be in the future, a bit like Minority Report or some parallel universe thing.

 

What if he is meant to be the dead one? [Hollywood\]

 

or

 

He is the killer but has blocked it. [French/Euro cinema\]

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The lass at the bar has been stalking him for years, and the dead body is a person who stole his identity.

 

Good.

 

Has she been stalking him or the stolen identity dead guy?  :pow:

 

both cause she has split personality and one side is a filthy(as in dead slutty) psycho stalker that killed the object of the timd personalities affection(stolen identity guy)

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Is this how the "Heroes" script writers work?

 

Not on this level mate.  :aww:

 

Thought as much.

 

Can the guy who breaks into the house be played by JCVD and the woman stalker/investigater be played by Pat Butcher?

 

I have a cockney time cop thingy building in my head.........

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Is this how the "Heroes" script writers work?

 

Not on this level mate.  :aww:

 

Thought as much.

 

Can the guy who breaks into the house be played by JCVD and the woman stalker/investigater be played by Pat Butcher?

 

I have a cockney time cop thingy building in my head.........

 

Not sure I can green light that son.  :lol:

 

But who do you see as the guy if it was a psychological thriller?

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Is this how the "Heroes" script writers work?

 

Not on this level mate.  :aww:

 

Thought as much.

 

Can the guy who breaks into the house be played by JCVD and the woman stalker/investigater be played by Pat Butcher?

 

I have a cockney time cop thingy building in my head.........

 

Not sure I can green light that son.  :lol:

 

But who do you see as the guy if it was a psychological thriller?

 

 

Oh man, would have loved to hear JCVD try a cockney accent. 

 

Christian Slater, hes not done much lately.

 

 

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A man starts getting letters with his name on but with another address on it (the other is crossed out and his written in). He goes there out of curiosity and starts watching the place. After a while (a few days) he loses patience and breaks in. What does he find?

 

A dead body, himself.

 

 

 

Next scene he is in a bar and a very attractive woman starts talking to him as if she knows him well. He's never seen her before.

 

She's a time travelling undercover agent on a mission to recover a rouge robot unit (the dead body) only to find the man in the bar. She thinks its the robot she's tracking, but it is in fact another robot who was sent on the same unknown mission but his memory unit became scrambled when he travelled and now thinks he's human.

 

She also is a robot, but she doesn't know it either. - the twist later.

 

 

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Uwe Rosler?

 

Who he?

 

Played for man city ages ago in the prem.  Scored a few goals for them and kept them up.  1996ish.  I think

 

Was at Southampton for a bit as well.

 

Harry Redknapp should be the face of the mastermind goon, manipulating the world press from his NWO headquarters in North London linked to Tel-Aviv by a wormhole.

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