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[Kaizero]

Right, working on a Sci-Fi inspired flick, and with all work I'm doing at the moment, I'm looking for a co-writer on the project to ease the workload. If you have any experience with any sort of writing, and/or sci-fi knowledge. Send me a PM or mail me at [email protected] with a short description of what work you've done.

 

Asking on here 'cause I'm too lazy to actively search for a writer who may just be a douche. On here I at least know who the douches are already. 

 

Naturally, it's unpaid until picked up.

 

 

[Kaizero]

And whilst on the subject, if any of you are aspiring screenwriters and have written something worthwhile. I'd be happy to enter an NDA (Non-Disclosure Agreement) and see if it's good enough for me to look into optioning, as we're looking at getting a few more shoot ready scripts in our vault for the future.

[Fatwax]

Shotgun the soundtrack. Whammo.

[Rich]

Right, working on a Sci-Fi inspired flick, and with all work I'm doing at the moment, I'm looking for a co-writer on the project to ease the workload. If you have any experience with any sort of writing, and/or sci-fi knowledge. Send me a PM or mail me at [email protected] with a short description of what work you've done.

 

Asking on here 'cause I'm too lazy to actively search for a writer who may just be a douche. On here I at least know who the douches are already. 

 

Naturally, it's unpaid until picked up.

 

 

This lad will go far.

[Kaizero]

Right, working on a Sci-Fi inspired flick, and with all work I'm doing at the moment, I'm looking for a co-writer on the project to ease the workload. If you have any experience with any sort of writing, and/or sci-fi knowledge. Send me a PM or mail me at [email protected] with a short description of what work you've done.

 

Asking on here 'cause I'm too lazy to actively search for a writer who may just be a douche. On here I at least know who the douches are already. 

 

Naturally, it's unpaid until picked up.

 

 

This lad will go far.

 

Well, yes. I already have tbf. Two features, one animated feature and two television pilots in pre-production speak for themselves.  Albeit only the two pilots are scripted by me.

[relámpago blanco]

I could give you some guidance on making any scientific parts of your film, I havea  deep understanding of anti-gravity technology if you have any spacecraft in it.

[Rich]

Right, working on a Sci-Fi inspired flick, and with all work I'm doing at the moment, I'm looking for a co-writer on the project to ease the workload. If you have any experience with any sort of writing, and/or sci-fi knowledge. Send me a PM or mail me at [email protected] with a short description of what work you've done.

 

Asking on here 'cause I'm too lazy to actively search for a writer who may just be a douche. On here I at least know who the douches are already. 

 

Naturally, it's unpaid until picked up.

 

 

This lad will go far.

 

Well, yes. I already have tbf. Two features, one animated feature and two television pilots in pre-production speak for themselves.  Albeit only the two pilots are scripted by me.

 

I wasn't being funny. The bit I bolded made me chuckle. (Also knew you've had some success already!)

[Northerngimp]

I have some ideas but can never find time to write them down and send the time doing it.

[Kaizero]

Right, working on a Sci-Fi inspired flick, and with all work I'm doing at the moment, I'm looking for a co-writer on the project to ease the workload. If you have any experience with any sort of writing, and/or sci-fi knowledge. Send me a PM or mail me at [email protected] with a short description of what work you've done.

 

Asking on here 'cause I'm too lazy to actively search for a writer who may just be a douche. On here I at least know who the douches are already. 

 

Naturally, it's unpaid until picked up.

 

 

This lad will go far.

 

Well, yes. I already have tbf. Two features, one animated feature and two television pilots in pre-production speak for themselves.  Albeit only the two pilots are scripted by me.

 

I wasn't being funny. The bit I bolded made me chuckle. (Also knew you've had some success already!)

 

Ah, no worries then. Thought you were being funny

[Rich]

Nah, just summed up exactly what would be my reasoning should I never need to come on here and ask for somebody to help me do something.

[Kaizero]

Nah, just summed up exactly what would be my reasoning should I never need to come on here and ask for somebody to help me do something.

 

Yeah I still believe there are some sensible people on here that are possible to cooperate with on something, you being one of the sensible for instance, you ever done some script work?

[SEMTEX]

I could give you some guidance on making any scientific parts of your film, I havea  deep understanding of anti-gravity technology if you have any spacecraft in it.

 

[Kaizero]

I could give you some guidance on making any scientific parts of your film, I havea  deep understanding of anti-gravity technology if you have any spacecraft in it.

 

If that's meant serious, that'd actually be great. Though wouldn't be for more than doing the description of eventual spacecrafts unless you want in on the co-writing spot.

[relámpago blanco]

I could give you some guidance on making any scientific parts of your film, I havea  deep understanding of anti-gravity technology if you have any spacecraft in it.

 

If that's meant serious, that'd actually be great. Though wouldn't be for more than doing the description of eventual spacecrafts unless you want in on the co-writing spot.

I was actually being serious, anti-gravity technology is confirmed to exist and you can actually buy anti gravity kits on the internet that enable you to make very small things float, there are rumours also that the B2 stealth Bomber actually makes use of this technology as alot of aero-engineers can't work out how it actually flys as the shape wouldn't generate enough lift. 

 

I'll have a bash at co-writing, if you want to win over the hardened Sci-Fi fans you should explain how things work using actual Physics laws.

[Dave]

Confirmed to exist?

[relámpago blanco]

Confirmed to exist?

The tecnology, but not if its actually been implemented in a craft although,  someone actually has patented this, Boris Volfson.  There are also stories stating Lockheed have developed a craft called the X-22a, however, although there are patents I believe for this, no details have been released so I highly doubt it actually is an anti-gravity craft.

[Dave]

Any links on this tech?

[relámpago blanco]

http://www.prleap.com/pr/52742/

 

http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/2157975.stm

 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anti-gravity

 

http://www.antigravitytechnology.net/

 

I'll test you on your knowledge afterwards

[Guest elbee909]

If it's in space that gravity isn't much of an issue, is it?

[relámpago blanco]

If it's in space that gravity isn't much of an issue, is it?

You are still undee the influence of gravity in space just much less.  If you are near the moon you wont feel much gravity but if there was none why would the moon circle earth?

[Guest elbee909]

If it's in space that gravity isn't much of an issue, is it?

You are still undee the influence of gravity in space just much less.  If you are near the moon you wont feel much gravity but if there was none why would the moon circle earth?

 

That's why I said it isn't much of an issue, rather than 'not an issue'!

[relámpago blanco]

If it's in space that gravity isn't much of an issue, is it?

You are still undee the influence of gravity in space just much less.  If you are near the moon you wont feel much gravity but if there was none why would the moon circle earth?

 

That's why I said it isn't much of an issue, rather than 'not an issue'!

It doesnt just eliminate gravity it can propel you.

[Dave]

Yeah, I read the Wiki page which basically says it's very unlikely to be possible.

[relámpago blanco]

Yeah, I read the Wiki page which basically says it's very unlikely to be possible.

Its already been done in experiments, it's just not likely to be done to such an extent where it can counter the earth's graviational field until we find a new matierial which has the power to generate this.

 

Edit: uNless scientists already have a matierial with such properties.

[NE6]

I've been working on this for a while now and it would be great to see what someone of your calibre thinks of it. Don't be afraid to be harsh!

 

here's a little taster of the opening scenes:

 

A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far, away...

 

 

  It is a dark time for the Rebellion. Although the Death Star has

been destroyed, Imperial troops have driven the Rebel forces from

their hidden base and pursued them across the galaxy.

  Evading the dreaded Imperial Starfleet, a group of freedom fighters

led by Luke Skywalker has established a new secret base on the remote

ice world of Hoth.

  The evil lord Darth Vader, obsessed with finding young Skywalker,

has dispatched thousands of remote probes into the far reaches of

space...

 

 

EXTERIOR: GALAXY -- PLANET HOTH

 

          A Star Destroyer moves through space, releasing Imperial probe

        robots from its underside.

          One of these probes zooms toward the planet Hoth and lands

        on its ice-covered surface. An explosion marks the point of

        impact.

 

EXTERIOR: HOTH -- METEORITE CRATER -- SNOW PLAIN -- DAY

 

          A weird mechanical sound rises above the whining of the

        wind. A strange probe robot, with several extended sensors,

        emerges from the smoke-shrouded crater. The ominous mechanical

        probe floats across the snow plain and disappears into the

        distance.

 

EXTERIOR: PLAIN OF HOTH -- DAY

 

          A small figure gallops across the windswept ice slope. The

        bundled rider is mounted on a large gray snow lizard, a

        Tauntaun. Curving plumes of snow rise from beneath the

        speeding paws of the two-legged beast.

          The rider gallops up a slope and reins his lizard to a

        stop. Pulling off his protective goggles, Luke Skywalker

        notices something in the sky. He takes a pair of

        electrobinoculars from his utility belt and through them sees

        smoke rising from where the probe robot has crashed.

          The wind whips at Luke's fur-lined cap and he activates a

        comlink transmitter. His Tauntaun shifts and moans nervously

        beneath him.

 

LUKE: (into comlink) Echo Three to Echo Seven. Han, old buddy, do you

read me?

          After a little static a familiar voice is heard.

 

HAN: (over comlink) Loud and clear, kid. What's up?

 

LUKE: (into comlink) Well, I finished my circle. I don't pick up any

life readings.

 

HAN: (over comlink) There isn't enough life on this ice cube to fill a

space cruiser. The sensors are placed. I'm going back.

 

LUKE: (into comlink) Right. I'll see you shortly. There's a meteorite

that hit the ground near here. I want to check it out. It won't take

long.

 

          Luke clicks off his transmitter and reins back on his

        nervous lizard. He pats the beast on the head to calm it.

 

LUKE: Hey, steady girl. What's the matter? You smell something?

 

          Luke takes a small device from his belt and starts to

        adjust it when suddenly a large shadow falls over him from

        behind. He hears a monstrous howl and turns to see an eleven-

        foot-tall shape towering over him. It is a Wampa Ice Creature,

        lunging at him ferociously.

 

LUKE: Aaargh!

 

          Luke grabs for his pistol, but is hit flat in the face by a

        huge white claw. He falls unconscious into the snow and in a

        moment the terrified screams of the Tauntaun are cut short by

        the horrible snap of a neck being broken.

          The Wampa Ice Creature grabs Luke by one ankle and drags

        him away across the frozen plain.

 

EXTERIOR: HOTH -- REBEL BASE ENTRANCE -- DAY

 

          A stalwart figure rides his Tauntaun up to the entrance

        of an enormous ice cave.

 

INTERIOR: HOTH -- REBEL BASE -- MAIN HANGAR DECK

 

          Rebel troopers rush about unloading supplies and otherwise

        securing their new base. The rider, Han Solo, swings off his

        lizard and pulls off his goggles.

          He walks into the main hangar deck toward the Millennium

        Falcon, which is parked among several fighters. Mechanics, R2

        units, and various other droids hurry about. Han stops at the

        Millennium Falcon where his Wookiee copilot, Chewbacca, is

        welding on a central lifter. Chewie stops his work and lifts

        his face shield, growling an irritated greeting to his boss.

 

HAN: Chewie!

 

          The Wookiee grumbles a reply.

 

HAN: All right, don't lose your temper. I'll come right back and give

you a hand.

 

          Chewbacca puts his mask back on and returns to his welding

        as Han leaves.

 

INTERIOR: HOTH -- REBEL BASE -- COMMAND CENTER

 

          A makeshift command center has been set up in a blasted area

        of thick ice. The low-ceilinged room is a beehive of activity.

        Controllers, troops, and droids move about setting up

        electronic equipment and monitoring radar signals.

          General Rieekan straightens up from a console at Han's

        approach.

 

RIEEKAN: Solo?

 

HAN: No sign of life out there, General. The sensors are in place.

You'll know if anything comes around.

 

RIEEKAN: Commander Skywalker reported in yet?

 

HAN: No. He's checking out a meteorite that hit near him.

 

RIEEKAN: (indicates radar screen) With all the meteor activity in this

system, it's going to be difficult to spot approaching ships.

 

          Taking a deep breath, Han blurts out what is on his mind.

 

HAN: General, I've got to leave. I can't stay anymore.

 

          Princess Leia, standing at a console nearby, is dressed in a

        short white combat jacket and pants. Her hair is braided across

        her head in a Nordic fashion. She overhears their

        conversation and seems somewhat distressed.

 

RIEEKAN: I'm sorry to hear that.

 

HAN: Well, there's a price on my head. If I don't pay off Jabba the

Hut, I'm a dead man.

 

RIEEKAN: A death mark's not an easy thing to live with. You're a good

fighter, Solo. I hate to lose you.

 

HAN: Thank you, General.

 

          He turns to Leia as Rieekan moves away.

 

HAN: (with feeling) Well, Your Highness, I guess this is it.

 

LEIA: That's right.

 

          Leia is angry. Han sees she has no warmth to offer him. He

        shakes his head and adopts a sarcastic tone.

 

HAN: (cooly) Well, don't get all mushy on me. So long, Princess.

 

          Han walks away into the quiet corridor adjoining the

        command center. Leia stews a moment, then hurries after him.

 

INTERIOR: HOTH -- REBEL BASE -- ICE CORRIDOR

 

LEIA: Han!

 

          Han stops in the corridor and turns to face Leia.

 

HAN: Yes, Your Highnessness?

 

LEIA: I thought you decided to stay.

 

HAN: Well, the bounty hunter we ran into on Ord Mantell changed my

mind.

 

LEIA: Han, we need you!