Don't take this as just another insult, call it constructive criticism if you like.
Who were your representatives who met with the club? If they were all just 16 or whatever then how professional do you expect the club to be dealing with you? And I can guarantee that until the name is changed there is no way you will get any official recognition or support. Your 'portfolio' or 'manifesto' or whatever you are now calling it has some good ideas but stands out as exactly what it is, a schoolboys report. You need to get some adult help, setting it out and rewording parts. Ideally all this should have been done before you met with them because first impressions will stick, but if you manage to get another meeting then get some more mature representatives and try to go about the whole thing in the same 'professional manner' that you want to be treated.